Five things I will want to talk you out of putting in your newsletter

1. We've rebranded the company and have a fantastic new web site to show for it
2. We've just returned from a brilliant golfing holiday to Portugal with our top 2% of customers
3. We have two new receptionists and an office manager and here are their happy, smiling faces
4. Please fill in this extensive survey
5. If you want more information, just go to our web site and see if you can find it

You can talk me back into any of them by successfully completing the following sentence...

“And this will benefit you my customer because …”

1 comment:

John White said...

6. Have a look at this lovely photograph of the outside of our building.

7. Any sentence beginning with the word "We".